Thank you for finally loading your video. I love the song and the concept, however you will need to fix some errors. Here are my suggestions: 1. When counting machines--9 is KYUUdai not kyodai and the JUUDAI is hard to hear. 2. When counting birds--9 is KYUUwa not kyowa and JUUwa not joowa. 3. When doing the rap, you may want to use the Japanese words once you have introduced them: In the いけ there is a かめ。 I think you used the word pond. If you could just re-record your song, you should be able to dub it over. Please have everything fixed and uploaded by Thursday, at 8:00 pm.
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ReplyDeleteThank you for finally loading your video. I love the song and the concept, however you will need to fix some errors. Here are my suggestions:
ReplyDelete1. When counting machines--9 is KYUUdai not kyodai and the JUUDAI is hard to hear.
2. When counting birds--9 is KYUUwa not kyowa and JUUwa not joowa.
3. When doing the rap, you may want to use the Japanese words once you have introduced them: In the いけ there is a かめ。 I think you used the word pond.
If you could just re-record your song, you should be able to dub it over.
Please have everything fixed and uploaded by Thursday, at 8:00 pm.